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Nicknames: D.W., Zero of Legend (PS3 Name)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Location: Puerto Rico
Tastes?: Straight
Hobbies: Video Games, Writting, Music, Movies, Comedy
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-Video Games: Megaman (All Series), Ratchet and Clank, The Legend of Zelda, Sly Cooper Trilogy, Metroid Series, Okami, Fire Emblem, Xenosaga, Final Fantasy X, Katamari Damacy Series, Phantom Brave, Metal Gear Solid 3, Kirby
-Manga: Pokemon Adventure, Old Boy, Pretty Face, Trans Venus, Black Jack, Shut Hell, SWOT, Bleach, Psyren, Franken Fran, Parasite, Rosario+Vampire, Full Metal Alchemist and Deadman Wonderland
Dislikes: Liars above all else
Dreams: Achieving True Happyness

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Praise where Praise is Due: When you Reach Me by Rebeca Stea posted Nov 4th 2010, 3:07PM
Mood: Music: Shin Megami Tensei: Strange Journey OST- An Honor Befitting
Some people review games, others review my movies, me? I'll do books... and games. I may not be the most literate person around, but hey, Props where Props are Due. Also, Shameless Advertising when it involves something good.

Actually, I wonder why I'm even bothering giving props to the writer. This book already won the John Newberry Medal. Ah well, I still want to give my take on this book, and hopefully, get others to buy, read or at least comment on it. Sadly I've never reviewed books before, so yesh... I don't want to give spoilers so this is gonna be hard... Time to try and set up some structure...

[The First Sentence]

"So Mom got the postcard today. It says Congratulations in big curly letters, and at the very top is the address of Studio TV-15 on West, 58th Street. After three years of trying, she has actually made it. She's going to be a contestant, on the $20,000 Pyramid, which is hosted by Dick Clark"

I'll be completely honest, the only thing remotely good about that sentence is the mere style. Sure, it introduces us to the characters fairly quick and what's going to be a major plot-point. But... when I first red this, I mocked it.

[So what? She's going to get rich by the end?] I thought

Not really, but that's besides the point. The opening paragraph, doesn't really attracts you to read the story. It's the voice tone used that attracts you, or at least this was the case for me. Don't let the opening paragraph fool you, just keep on reading, cause this book is like music for your eyes if your eyes could hear music.


[Grammar and Punctuation]

I adore the way this woman wrote out this story, and I feel I learned alot from it. I red through 100 pages of this 197 page book PURELY cause I wanted to see how this woman wrote out this story. The context, the words, the symbols and style. I can't remember a simple phrase or sentence from this story at memory, but usually if a reader can just, read through it like I did, it means the writer's got skill and I ain't denying this story that.

The story's written in a first person perspective, we see what Miranda sees and how she interacts with the world at large. Though it's only in the middle that we realize that we're not reading what's happening, we're reading what happened. That doesn't change a darn thing though. But regardless of what the point of view is, Miranda's always a wonderful champ to follow around.


[Characters]

Considering the story's length, there's quite a few characters, and all of them are developed to a decent extent. All of them are likeable even if some are sort of cryptic. The main ones are however...

Miranda- The girl we follow around and the Protagonist to a decent extent
Sal- Our Main Protagonist,Miranda's best friend up till he was punched by Marcus at which point, things went awry. The whole story is focused on him essentially.
Marcus- The brainiac who punched Sal to prove his brother wrong. He's a math genious and serves a vital role in the plot, for the better or the worst.

Miranda's Mom- The one mentioned in the first paragraph and an important secondary character. She has an office job and is barely earning enough cause she had to stop studying to take care of Miranda.
Richard- Miranda's Mom's Boyfriend and the only MAN of the story. A guy who's an expert with knots and is overall sailorish. He's also referred to as Mr. Perfect most of the time. Much like Miranda's Mom, he's past of the supporting cast.

Julia- An antagonist at first, but by the end, we see a new side to her. She could be compared to the rival, and is at first seen as a Snobby Bitch Princess.
Annemarie- Julia's Best Friend up till they have a fight. She sort of plays the role of Sal for Julia in a sense. She's somewhat sick and alongside Colin, becomes a close friend to Miranda. Like Julia, she's wealthy

Jimmy- The owner of a sandwich shop which Miranda and her friends often visit and eventually get employed. Jimmy's only there to stir up certain things, but for the brief time ya know him. He's likeable, it's just that he's The Boss.
Colin- Miranda's third closest friend, a chatter-box that's sort of like a class-clown. Not much to say about him except, he's likeable. He just doesn't do alot...

I might have missed one character or another but I'll let those who read this book find them. Overall though, the cast is good and they all serve their purpose. I loved most of them and had a good time seeing their names pop-up, except Colin. Cause Class Clowns deserve nothing but the Silver Bullet.

[Atmosphere]
...............Yeah...I'll finish this later....

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Yeah... I'm sorry for ending this journal so abruptly. But I lost inspiration to finish writing this, *bows* I promise this won't happen again. But till then I have a question..

What should I read now?
A)Flipped
B)War Horse
C)To Kill A Mockingbird
D)Wuthering Heights
E)Among the Impostors (Yes, I have the whole series of books)

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JediKitteh Says: (Dec 4th 2010, 4:55PM)
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thank you for watching me
Val Wing Says: (Nov 9th 2010, 1:10PM)
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Thanks so much for the watch!!!
MysteryFlavour Says: (Nov 8th 2010, 4:17AM)
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HURP! >8C

-SMACKS WITH CANE!-

TY bro :3

-SMACKS AGAIN-
MokoMonster Says: (Nov 8th 2010, 3:47AM)
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Thank you muchly for the watch!!
FoodyMcFeadawulv Says: (Nov 8th 2010, 2:44AM)
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thank you for the watch hope i dont disappoint
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